So great Aiden! Your drawing is detailed and explains all the parts well. Your write up about the origins of Robocar is interesting and fun to read, with good use of specific vocabulary and detail to help the audience understand the process. Next time you could break your writing into paragraphs, using the places where you have the Chapters as a guide to make a new paragraph. Your writing is always so insightful and fun, excellent work.
So great Aiden! Your drawing is detailed and explains all the parts well. Your write up about the origins of Robocar is interesting and fun to read, with good use of specific vocabulary and detail to help the audience understand the process. Next time you could break your writing into paragraphs, using the places where you have the Chapters as a guide to make a new paragraph. Your writing is always so insightful and fun, excellent work.
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