THE WORLD WITH NO CARNIVOROUS
BY AIDEN SADLER-ILES
PROLOGUE
The world I live in is known for its many carnivorous creatures. But, what if there was a world; with no such thing as ‘carnivorous’. The world would be different, wouldn't it?
Filled with more vegetarians, and vegans, than any other world, out of any world, in any galaxy, universe, multiverse, or even further. To find this planet, first you need to exit universe 13.8BYA, and then turn left at the first intersection you see, onto “Parallel universe ST-NO_PARALLEL_PARKING". When on this street, turn left onto post ten trillion avenue, go forward until you see this mailbox code on a mailbox (its bigger than you’d think.): 64.47TYA. Go up the driveway, and ask the first person you see, “do you know were Earth 64.47TYA is?” Then further follow the instructions given.
This is a story about this planet, and how one man changed, everything.
TAHI
Thursday, September 17th, 2020
“Day 105. I didn't do much today. It was a good day though. I had finally exited the universe 13.8BYA. It was not easy; it took a while, though.”
1, year later.
“What is happening. I can't tell. It's been 1 year since I exited the universe 13.8BYA-oh no...
To be continued...
Kia ora Aiden! Wow what a cool DLO, you are continuing to grow your knowledge with everything digital and use it to create original learning artefacts. The intro is superb, catchy and hooks the reader in straight away. The voice overs are a nice touch, and the script you used had humour added which made me want to keep watching! Your understanding of a balanced diet is wide and you use complex vocabulary to show your wide knowledge. The only feedback I have is the dead air time between audio and typed points, this is only a technical glitch and I am sure you are working on making that part flow at real time. Everything about your DLO highlighted your creativity and technical skill, keep creating 'In the know with Aiden' it is a great concept. Nice touch adding in te reo Maori with 'Tahi' as part of your writing. Keep up the great mahi Aiden!
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