Kia ora Aiden, wow I am hooked into your writing! You are developing a very sophisticated style of narrative writing, I can hear your personality and immense knowledge really shining through to make the story full of humour and ideas that are developed well. You describe your characters thoughts and add in all the information needed to ensure the reader has a picture perfect vision of your character and the ongoing plot. Keep it up Aiden, we have e-asTTle in Term 4 and this kind of complexity would shine, now we need to practise the solution. Creating a ending to the narrative that lives up to the brilliant build up. Awesome Aiden.
sorry 'bout the video credits bein' so long
ReplyDeleteKia ora Aiden, wow I am hooked into your writing! You are developing a very sophisticated style of narrative writing, I can hear your personality and immense knowledge really shining through to make the story full of humour and ideas that are developed well. You describe your characters thoughts and add in all the information needed to ensure the reader has a picture perfect vision of your character and the ongoing plot. Keep it up Aiden, we have e-asTTle in Term 4 and this kind of complexity would shine, now we need to practise the solution. Creating a ending to the narrative that lives up to the brilliant build up. Awesome Aiden.
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